I get the first review nice :D :D Very good and immersive writing in the first chapter and provoking interest for more. So i give you a 5 star for the quality of your first chapter and for motivation. Looking forward to more chapters of your story.

The first chapter was pretty different and refreshing from a usual story.. It doesn't start with any of the usual drama, but instead it works shows us the struggles of a normal kid with an abusive father. The MC is unsure of himself, and doesn't have any 'cheats' till now, which means it will likely be an epic saga from of a child from ordinary to the peak. An inspiring story indeed..

finally, the time is nigh. yes, lord author, the final boss, will write a self-review. i know, shameless. for starters, i think that this has turned into a very nice novel. the pacing has been good and im liking how the characters are turning out. however, more than anything, i have been focusing on building a unique and interesting world full of wonder and a unique cultivation and magic system. thank you for reading

Story about the adventures of a little kind boy, named Saiph, through worlds in a tower. The story, so far, is about hardship with the confort of the distraction when learning about the world. Will Saiph achieve power enough to steer his own fate? Will he find a place to truly call home?

Writing Quality: 5/5 refreshing style, doesn't read like a basic 'see spot run' story but also natural and not someone going to a thesaurus every other word Stability of Updates: 5/5 like clack word, what a madlad Story Development: 5/5 perfect. I write this at around 20 chaps. Building a solid foundation and still fun to read. There may be a doofus or 2 may say things like 'too slow' but they probably struggle reading above 6 year level Character Design: 5/5 real characters with real reactions to relatable issues World Background: 5/5 seriously just read it at this. Well defined and detailed

Brutal but beneficially so. While to some it may seem slow i find its pace deserving of praise, in most novels i see around these parts the characters grow to fast and succeed too easily, while pleasant at first it quickly becomes mundane, this novel has reversed such a fate and the uphill battle that is this boy's life is a pleasant, though sometimes painful, reminder that life can be unbearably hard yet still not keep even the most average down as long as you take advantage of what little you have. The slap in the face that is the cruelty of life grounds this story a little closer to reality, but the aspirations held and the battles fought will surely be awe inspiring. If this story isn't for you, thats fine, but i personally would love to see one such as saiph,depraved from the start, fight a proper battle to the top, not just a given victory but a feat gained through more struggle and hardship than it may be worth, a victory in the face of a harsh reality set in fantasy.

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I quite liked this story. Solid writing. And a bit more descriptive than many other light tales. But it seems like the writer has dropped it. Too bad.

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