Review Detail of ErozothDraeor in An Immortal's Tales Of Demons And Gods
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It is by far one of the worse fan fiction of this type. The MC, supposedly, HUNDREDS of MILLIONS years old, lacks common sense and basic survival instinct. The most annoying part of this novel? It's not an improvement, it's not even a different story from the original. It follows the same steps and arcs with a different MC, he even fights the same evil family (which he is a member off), that the original MC fights at first. To finish, the MC is the weakest part of this novel and due to it not being original its not worth the time reading further which is why the low score on story (being the same as original), character design and world background are a copy.
An Immortal's Tales Of Demons And Gods
ElionAVL
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The thing is, the writing quality is great as you can see by the stars, which is the only reason I wrote the review (my first review btw). I feel you followed the plot to much and didn't really thought how things look from reader perspective, I always imagine that the fanfic is aimed to correct what many people didn't like about a novel (maybe the MC suffers to much, maybe he is too stupid, maybe he is too cruel). Anyway, its only one novel, my words may have been too extreme but in general I hope the author sees it and maybe takes something. Good luck in future novels.
ElionAVL:I see, thanks for the review. Yeah I also saw the same problem as you, I didn't really add something in the first 59ch, but I'd really LOVE if you check the other 100 chapters, I deviated from the story... Which is even worse... I'd rate my story bout the same as you.
No but, I'm kind of laughing because nearly 60-70% of my novel isn't even based in the actual novel's stories, it's original story. Which is also a reason why this fell out of top 20 xD
ErozothDraeor:The thing is, the writing quality is great as you can see by the stars, which is the only reason I wrote the review (my first review btw). I feel you followed the plot to much and didn't really thought how things look from reader perspective, I always imagine that the fanfic is aimed to correct what many people didn't like about a novel (maybe the MC suffers to much, maybe he is too stupid, maybe he is too cruel). Anyway, its only one novel, my words may have been too extreme but in general I hope the author sees it and maybe takes something. Good luck in future novels.