Review Detail of lostwithnomap in The Dorm Guard

This is a great story. From start to end we see the characters learn from their experiences and genuinely form connections. While there are some easily fixed typos and grammatical errors, the writing is fluid and engaging. Congratulations on creating a one of a kind world and filling it with realistic and relatable characters. Your commitment to diversity and staying away from often harmful stereotypes is hard to find in the writing world. I highly recommend to anyone who wants to read a heartwarming story about love and friendship. Honestly I can't wait for what you do next.