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The Dorm Guard

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Dorm Guard: the man or woman dedicated to the protection/guardship within a dorm. * Landon Becks is a sports scholarship student at White Winter Prep, with only one duty: guard the students in his dorm. This duty is more easily said than done, because High School is not always kind to disabled students, and none of the students in his dorm fit the criteria of ordinary. With a blind artist, a deaf dancer and her translator, a self-proclaimed Princess of Pastries, a stubborn paraplegic girl, a mute prodigy and son and daughter of a potential mobster, it's not long before he realises it's not just inside the school he must protect his dormmates from. A story of High School drama, suspense, romance and family. Am aware the grammar isn't brilliant, would just love an opinion on the story and characters.

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lostwithnomap
lostwithnomapLv3lostwithnomap

This is a great story. From start to end we see the characters learn from their experiences and genuinely form connections. While there are some easily fixed typos and grammatical errors, the writing is fluid and engaging. Congratulations on creating a one of a kind world and filling it with realistic and relatable characters. Your commitment to diversity and staying away from often harmful stereotypes is hard to find in the writing world. I highly recommend to anyone who wants to read a heartwarming story about love and friendship. Honestly I can't wait for what you do next.

Veronica8
Veronica8Lv5Veronica8

I'm kind of jumping the gun here, since I've only read a few chapters in. I'm giving full marks for the ambition and originality of this storyline. So, far the writing isn't pretentious, but respectful. I always hold a bit of worry when writers attempt to write from perspective of less able people. Since I'm almost cognitively deaf myself, I feel uncomfortable when there is a stereotype of pity applied to conditions. You didn't do this as far as I can see. So, I give kudos. Writing-wise, the pace is fluid and easy, and character design is distinct, with the world design unravelling naturally and logically. Not much info dump, which was good. Keep at it.

Cynk_Napp
Cynk_NappLv5Cynk_Napp

A special school with girls that are partially disabled (or perhaps exemplary in dealing with their lives). A young man (student) that is good at fighting is hired as a live in body guard for dorm. A completed story.

J_Enyl
J_EnylLv6J_Enyl

Hmmm haven't read it so far but the summary is very compelling. The characters have different personalities and background. It's making me curious how will the story develops and who will be the mc's love interest. I wish there will be no harem. Please. 😅🙏

dezanos
dezanosLv13dezanos

Honestly Great novel as far as iam involved xD Filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler

luvely1004
luvely1004Lv4luvely1004

Pretty good ............... ............... ............... ................ ................ ................ .......... ...... ................... ..................

Cze_Rina
Cze_RinaLv3Cze_Rina

I hope that the author will released the following chapters. This is such an interesting story. It would be such a waste if we won't be able to read the rest til the end. The story development and character design is a perfect match for the flow. So I hope that this will be completed..

AshleyTrevor
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Iiieeee
IiieeeeLv10Iiieeee

Started to read and found it nice story, love it hopefully the story will relese frequently and complete finish Keep it up author 💪🙏💙💙💙

yoonly
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Wilscar
WilscarLv5Wilscar

Putting tags will help people decide if they want to read a novel. like is there action in this or is it a harem. i know i always look for tabs to figure out if i want to read something...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Cze_Rina
Cze_RinaLv3Cze_Rina

The story plot and its flow is good..although there are some confusing phrases and sentences, but the message is easily understood. The character representation of each is also unique and stands on a specific knowledge and design. The background in the uses of words are explained clearly. I just hope that there will be more development in the story. And I wish that the update is consistent.

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