Review Detail of Veronica8 in The Dorm Guard

I'm kind of jumping the gun here, since I've only read a few chapters in. I'm giving full marks for the ambition and originality of this storyline. So, far the writing isn't pretentious, but respectful. I always hold a bit of worry when writers attempt to write from perspective of less able people. Since I'm almost cognitively deaf myself, I feel uncomfortable when there is a stereotype of pity applied to conditions. You didn't do this as far as I can see. So, I give kudos. Writing-wise, the pace is fluid and easy, and character design is distinct, with the world design unravelling naturally and logically. Not much info dump, which was good. Keep at it.