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DeadmanWhisperer
DeadmanWhispererLv146yr
2018-11-15 02:54

The only author who keep trying to improve his writing by reading every comment. The reason readers who give bad review is because they are from old batch(old readers who read chapters before edited). Well the difficulty to comprehend this cultivation book is indeed hard 😂. Only after I read the simplified version, then I get the hang of it lol. It is about mc want to get stronger after regretting for being weak. This novel should contain tags like tragedy since mc's feeling can be felt by readers too

The Martial Master

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4.0
107 Chs

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Anthony_Criscione
Anthony_CriscioneLv12

Yo where the chapters go. I was really interested till I saw no chapters

4yr
DeadmanWhisperer
DeadmanWhispererLv14

Seems like the author delete all chapter

Anthony_Criscione:Yo where the chapters go. I was really interested till I saw no chapters
4yr
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infermite
infermite作者

To fill such a lonely review page I, rather brazenly, have gone against all conventions and reviewed my own work! Pls, comment here if you have any questions.

6yr

TheReadingDao
TheReadingDaoLv2

Pretty cool story. Although the cultivation can seem pretty confusing at the start, I think that it got better explained afterwards. It seems it has been slowed down later on, and I like how the author tries to improve 😂😂😂 A lot better compared to his other story.

5yr
Crow_OF_Judgement
Crow_OF_JudgementLv3

Sigh read till chapter 3 and couldn't take it anymore. Apparently, the so-called miss Yu doesn't do anything nice for him but he gets a sense of peace being around her. Apparently, she is going to get kidnapped but he has to fight for her, why? Because of plot development. These brain dead mc's and novels make frustrated. Done with the novel. Bye-bye. Good luck.

6yr
EternalGrowth
EternalGrowthLv5

I realize that after all the chapter i read i still doesn't make a review so this is my review. The main character has extreme tendency to be stronger for what the reason he has and i like him the author too describe other people like albeit slightly but like real people i like the plot and twist but i still doesn't see of where the MC set his eyes on, on the heaven or on the God of the universe i still doesn't know. For the world building for me it is little bagus but its likeable and i like it but there's is seriously a need of throughout explanation about power level how things work and the other. For the story development try to slow down a bit i think. And that's it and that is my longest review till the date. Thanks for the work author

6yr
reibei
reibeiLv15

I really like how the story starts and the future potential development looks really good, The cultivation system seems a little different and really cool,

6yr
Smellytofu123
Smellytofu123Lv4

Great 👍 story my dude 🚹 you just need to work on the stability of your updates and you can easily reach top 10 but other than that love the mc at least he better than those p##ssy mcs in isekai novels😂😂😂.

6yr
domain
domainLv5

Pls More chap readers love novel with more chapter............and keep up with the hard work..................................................................................................................

6yr
infermite
infermite作者

劇透

5yr
NightFoxxFan
NightFoxxFanLv14

I will say this I was kinda confused with it honestly it just kinda jumped right into it all kinda fast and the main characters along with the side character development seemed pretty rushed and the overall world building was also kinda not there and one more thing that female childhood friend / female boss just got kidnapped and it feels more like she was forgotten instead of getting stronger to rescue type of vibe I’m only giving my piece just so maybe in the future it might help you better I’m not criticizing to put you down but to maybe help in some form to get better novels this one is good compared to others because a lot of others just don’t care and I can see that you have taken time to review others so you can refine your own work and I thank you very much for that !

6yr
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