I will say this I was kinda confused with it honestly it just kinda jumped right into it all kinda fast and the main characters along with the side character development seemed pretty rushed and the overall world building was also kinda not there and one more thing that female childhood friend / female boss just got kidnapped and it feels more like she was forgotten instead of getting stronger to rescue type of vibe I’m only giving my piece just so maybe in the future it might help you better I’m not criticizing to put you down but to maybe help in some form to get better novels this one is good compared to others because a lot of others just don’t care and I can see that you have taken time to review others so you can refine your own work and I thank you very much for that !
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