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LoveBiscuit
LoveBiscuitLv35yr
2019-10-30 02:52

This was awful. I know this review will be deleted as all bad reviews are. But this novel is really trash. I turned off my brain to keep reading but I just found myself getting more and more annoyed. What kind of MC is this even? One thing that was incredibly stupid is that Qiu Yuan or whatever tf her name is. The MC helps her team with one clear. Then she starts to act like he is supposed to help them with everything afterwards. Why?? And then there's the whole brotherhood shiz. I mean, he did the whole work, he provided basically everything for the dungeon and he even told them before hand! Yet, at the end, they act like he has committed a deadly sin. Did I read this wrong or what??? Yeesh. What a piece of garbage, really.

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