Don't mind the bad criticism from others. Do the things you love, let them laugh at you. Once you reach your goal, ask them: "Who's laughing now?" -Zexeli
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ah, I know mb, ty for pointing it out, will go fix it now! Even when editing, sometimes I miss mistakes like this ._.
Thank you 😶🌫️💚
Hello! I appreciate your review and I'm glad you enjoyed the story! 🤗 Da blood pumping actions are sure to come, but unfortunately, our vampire boi is just a tad too weak for that after getting nerfed after becoming a vampire, first he has to level up his cultivation and develop more moves 😈
Uhhh... 👀 Apple juice?
Hehehe, thank you! 💚 Now, for the system, the fun fact is that this story was supposed to have a system from the very beginning, but I scratched that due to the aboundace of system novels and I couldn't find a way to make it fit, so I went with cultivation instead. Along the way, I found a way to put the system and I debated about it for a long time, but said f*** it, I wanted to try it and unfortunately... There are trends as well, sigh... Now, I can reassure you that the system won't impact the story in any well. It's simply a tool. He won't know information about stuff that are outside of collective and he won't get a sudden power up. Tbh, it will help the readers more than Luciel because we will be able to track his growth and power levels more easily now. And one more fun fact, I have been writting for the long time, but stopped for 5 years and I recently got into business. The Crimson Reaper is my side book to help me get back into business and to get familiar with webnovel. It grew dear to me and I will finish it because I want to give our vampire boi an ending he deserves 🥺 but my real deal is yet to come 😶🌫️
Yup Yup! Honestly, 95% things I do and decided to implement in my story, I want it to make sense and to fit in. The other 5% is when I make an oopsi 🫠 There are a few reasons why I went with the system, I could have made it for Luciel to acess it in some other way (like Nosferatu, who sees it as an imaginary library or Melisa who perceives it like a giant lake), but for simplicity sakes, even if unoriginal, the system seemed the best. And the system for Luciel kinda fits because the story is set in a far future and in the early chapters he was surprised to see a physical map that Nosferatu had shown him 😶🌫️ Also, I appreciate da comment a lot! Thank you! 🥰
I agree ._. The whole story is a disaster 😂
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It shall be explained 🤫