Strange_random

Greatly improved I’m not going to lie I’m super impressed with the story so far it’s starts of okay but later in the story it looks good great work improvement with the story

Your welcome and I hope you continue this story is not bad and I do hope you imporve and make a good story

Even if he did talk we all know that this is going to happen regardless what he says

I recently started reading this novel and was pleasantly surprised. The unique ability introduced in the story caught my attention, and I’m looking forward to seeing how it develops in future chapters. While it’s not without flaws, it doesn’t deserve the overly negative reviews from some readers. There are certainly worse stories out there, and this one shows real promise. I reccomend reading this for it’s uniqueness