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Sun Tzu would be very disappointed

Very difficult to read, filled with random irrelvent "Authors Notes" like its a youtube video and uses a play style dialogue format instead of book style.

For lack of a better term, this story does a lot of yapping. There was a point in which the Tsar and Kaiser Wilhelm met to discuss a skirmish, and before they had the conversation, there were paragraph after paragraph of describe exactly what they were about to discuss. If you are going to have a discussion, just have it. It just feels like it's wasting time for no reason in parts. I understand that this isn't a real novel, even if webnovel says it is, and as such, should not be expected to have been edited, but some simple avoiding redundancy should be easy.

Fallout New Vegas is the goat. I put 100 hours into it in 2 weeks the summer after my freshman year of high school.

yeah, it wasnt called world war 1 until after ww2

the second world war hasnt started yet, has it?

It's a fun story, but so much of what happens feels cheap. There are multiple points in which retcons occur just to facilitate boring sideplots, which takes away from the immersion by a great deal. Its only good that these side plots dont take much time, but that also just makes them feel cheaper. Overall, I think this should just be much shorter than it actually is. Before it's even halfway done, there are no more threats to the country, so berengar decides to go on colonial expidetions himself just to add tension and threats to him.

they either used fuel cells like the highwayman car in fallout 2 did, or they used an oil based fuel.

my brother and christ I did not say he shouldnt give the kid a dragon, I said he shouod not give the kid Balereon, his own dragon.