mixedSaint

ah…*takes drag* we love it when a plan comes together 👇

this should also have a direct impact on his chakra quantity/quality, right?

Let’s gooo

would the 2nd awakening be compounded or additional?

Oh, a bio/healing ability 👀😏

really enjoying your work so far! honestly can’t stress it enough, i’m hooked and refreshing like an addict for the next fix(chapter - p.s. when’s the mass release for this book?) secondly - i would love for the entire gang(Jazz, Sam, + Tuck) to start getting martial arts training/instruction and also regular combat experience(YJ + JL training sessions n shit - build some relations with other characters, especially their age). Lastly, i’m not super knowledgeable about the Laterns, so is there a ring you could give Jazz? also it would be dope if she could become some sort of psychic Mutate(?) or maybe learn magic from Zatana or Dr. Fate? Constantine will be around so maybe he sparks her interest.

author definitely SMASHED this ff idea; MC is the middle(?) child of the Fentons - it is best to view this story as an AU of both DP/DC however that does nothing to take away from the amazing world building, characters, and story/plot development. The pacing is smooth and at a comfortable pace, neither fast or slow - and allows for the building of tension and background plots to keep the pressure and overarching story interesting. The MC is obv Hulk - however he also has ghost powers, which we haven’t seen much of yet, however the sheer potential of the MC already has him collapsing reality. There are some plot holes/errors(Jazz being in the same grade/year/classes as her brothers) however i find it doesn’t take anything away from the quality, my opinion. The author is learning and growing with every chapter and story they upload and i’m excited to see where this goes.

i think, at least later on, it should minimum apply to energy techniques as a work-around to his limitations - it’ll make his chakra(energy source) more malleable and flexible, give additional properties; density/concentration, feeding/stuffing his cells with chakra to initiate some form of biological evolution(ie TLM), basically learning to manipulating his energy in any form his opponents can - adaptive energy source(?)

bro needs his “easy big guy, suns getting low…”

I agree with the professional moron, however, the fear ability works really well with his rage - in fact i recommend finding a way to double down and evolve it into a rage, nightmare esc bloodlust ‘force’(Emotional Devouring, Fear Manipulation, Conqueror’s Haki hybrid) that he can manipulate and is especially prominent when he gets emotional and rages. hell, later you can even connect the ability to death(endless) and dream(nightmares/fear - endless). also i’d really like to see an interaction with Didi