pepero0

It might be a choice but it disrupts the engagement of the reader and makes it harder to read

In terms of plot, this is pretty interesting but the writing needs a lottt of improvement. Like, during dialogue there would be missing details or responses wouldn’t match what was said before. For example, sometimes someone would answer a question that wasn’t asked or bring up something random without even finishing the previous convo

Basically 20 chapters for a single day to go by in that world after the first 100 chapters and mc doesn’t have his first time until early 100s not to mention the repetitive use of words with incorrect connotations like “affirmative” even the overall writing is so cringy with horrible references I got second hand embarrassment so many times when reading. what makes this book worse is that there are so many chapters for the mc’s other personas I almost skipped 100 chapters for that alone. Don’t recommend so save your time

Groomer 🤢

Can affirmative even be used in this context 😭

wow…

craziest comment goes too… FTBanime69. No cuz fr wtaf is this 🤨