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bye bye 1 milion ryo
Here it is XD
Holly fck... it's not a ,,ding,, XD
Hey i enjoyed reading your ff. Sure you can say it May had been writen as it was but still i enjoyed it. Keep up the good work :😀
As you said, you will rewrite this nocel (probably) so you know that you can writer it better so no problem. I quite enjoy your FF
The ff is Good. with small translation problem tho
What's more she already is a powerhouse and she is not so old + with the mc she will probably close, if not fully immortal