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SFGTMH is a well-written story with a lot of potential. TLDR: I enjoyed it. 13 chapters in, there are a lot of typical guys, but the main character manages to stay refreshing with his dedication to fatherhood and a bit of hyperbole to how he reacts to situations. Setting-wise, I think the world could do with a bit more fleshing out, perhaps during the MCs' next downtime. It's a bit early to comment on character development, but I hope that the daughter especially is shown to change over time as she grows, given her age and the stressors of the situation.
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Ah, men. Put two in a room and it's 99% posturing for every 1% of substance.
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