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Genuinely unsettled me at how good this could’ve been. The concept is unique but the execution is downright horrendous. The writing style is so weird including saying the first and last names of characters multiple times, unrealistic grammar/grammar mistakes from characters and others. The story has almost no originality it’s like 70% similar to the other novel. Not to mention mindless women chasing in this novel as well when there’s quite literally zero need for it. Everything completely upsetted me and im 100% sure others in the comments so I speak for all of us.

Overall very very good start, I immensely enjoy this concept. Feel like this one has the most potential to be honest. I especially like how accurate the mc is for the synopsis. Very good.

I enjoy the concept a lot, usually some of my favorite concepts in the cultivation genre. Although mc needs a bit of work the story is quite good.

Very refreshing to read. Scratches the itch for good op mc novels I’ve been looking for as well. Writing style is also immersive which adds to the satisfaction. Overall a perfect past time.

These last 2 chapters were far better than the last 5 and while I can’t put my finger on why, great job!

It probably wasn’t even meant like that weirdos. It was prolly a uncle point of view, you guys can’t gaslight me into believing it’s weird.

Glad I could help.

I’m liking the casualness of the writing and how simple everything is yet also detailed. It’s simple in a high quality kind of way. It’s not without its mistakes but it feels refreshing. It’s also not a completely original concept but it feels new in its own way. I deeply appreciate the thought you put into this as well. Nothing feels unnatural or inconsistent that I’ve noticed so far either. So while it’s not the best it could be yet I’m willing to grant a 5 star review because I believe it will be soon.

Unfortunately relateable

Fire novel so far I can't even lie