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Amazing job man, especially for what seems to be(correct me if I’m wrong) a first book.

This is honestly heat I’m ngl. The background is pretty unique and the time skips aren’t info dumps they actually WORK. I have high hopes for this man, keep it going. This hits all the spots I never knew itched.

I was able to do 70 even tho I woke up dead and I don’t exercise at all.

lol

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

I absolutely adore what is here so far. So I decided to post this review in hopes the author can update faster. While I'm not sure if this deserves 5 full stars I’m sure it’s close. So I’m willing to scrape up the extra points. The world building I feel like is the only somewhat lacking part of the novel. With that being said, there’s only a few chapters here so far. I’m willing to bet by chapter 5 that will cease to be the case. Now I’ll point out the parts I love. The writing style is absolutely amazing in this novel but I recognize it might not suit everyone’s taste. It’s very descriptive but the descriptions are short and to the point. Plentiful, but concise. It’s also amazing at building an environment, yet some people prefer more attention to immediate action or dialogue. I can say those points are not lacking. The dialogue has never felt flat to me, although the god could have been given a bit more care, everything else is perfect. It’s never generic, and the characters also stay consistent while still being given depth. I believe as long as this style is kept and is not changed due to negativity, and the story stays unique and immersive. This can hit top 10. I have faith

Absolutely beautiful. The scenery felt damn near mystical. Probably the most immersed I've been in awhile. Although I feel like the god scene didn't really match the theme but I get it. Probably hard to do reincarnation without overcomplicating it.

This is one of the best prologues I’ve read in quite some time. Congratulations author. I would love to see how you incorporate the concept into such a character and where you take this.

No problem brother, I’m sure many feel the same as well. Sometimes a little support is all it takes, I know that just as well.

Just read the disclaimer, ending is more than I expected so I still stand by most of what I said. Also, just know I have high expectations for the next novel if it aims to be better than this. However I’ll also be one of the first to support, and I’ll lyk how i feel with honest and constructive advice.