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That meliodas had far more experience than our mc, Oh meliodas has been through soo much stuff or mc has just begun his life even, having the all tools does not mean proficiency but experience with the right ones makes all the difference.

peak

Not gonna like i am all in for some drama this is kinda rare in this masterpiece of an ff. This fic is the good balance of everything and some much needed drama is also a very good addition. Especially when many things are still not revealed in the Game it's self

btw can you remove the diamond marks it's annoying when I use the audio mode from webnovel. I really enjoy it while working

me also waiting

it's good like dam good

I am dying due to laughing bro hes hilarious 😂😂😂😂😂😂 its's 5 am and i can't Stop reading way better than your everyday Mc I love you author this is a masterpiece. Plus the flying meteor hilarious 😂😂😂😂😂

First please Ignore these people shouting this that late pacing and shit. If they want Op shitin 2 days of training there are plenty already. Author I really loved his interaction with the yamanaka Ino and her mom. It was peak the way Sauske and Ino talked to each other. it was as if Sasuke was shown through Ino's view. but he wasnr't but i as reader kinda felt how enigmatic he was in that chapter. Also hate Ino's mom shes's the mother fookin Yamanaka clan heads's wife she should have tried to offer sauske free flowers but sasuke should have rejected it. ch 29 is kinda mid tho cause Sauske was too honest revealing his ace. I had hoped he went bat shit when Ayame gave him the noodle just to seem like a dum kid but he didn't. kinda sadage

A letter to author san My favourite ff author the due points you said is true in a sense but it gave your story a different twist. dungeons were also good just not the part part you made scared gears and swords useless. Other than that I wished that Riser got some justice but no gonna lie that beat up had a different magic of its own. So scratch that. So all in all a solid 8 in story pacing was also fine although a little slow and sloppy here and there and i think bringing shuri back is also kinda meh but sure ff for a reason I guess.

I was mind boggled when I started reading it but now it has lost its's high quality due to lack details and Mc constantly talking unrelated shit I mean I really like his persona and his jokes but the story is super shit as of now. No new developments so far but I don't know how to describe it lacks depth or more of a kick.