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AllFatherOmnis

AllFatherOmnis

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The Allfather of Omnisverse. I am the one who controls trillions of lives in my realm. I am the one who creates life, and I am the "Creator" for all my children.

2022-11-20 加入Czechia
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  • AllFatherOmnis
    AllFatherOmnis8 months ago
    回復 That_Annoying_guy

    Hi. None harem :)

  • AllFatherOmnis
    AllFatherOmnis2 years ago
    回復 Pandazzz_

    I agree. Thank you very much. After all, once I finish this season, I need to fix a few episodes. I've reread it and there were too many mistakes. Thank you so much for the advice :)

  • AllFatherOmnis
    AllFatherOmnis2 years ago
    回復 NovaEre

    He was trying to tell himself something that was clearly not true. Even though he knew it wasn't just a job, he didn't want to admit it to himself. Since living with Sophia, he's slowly realizing the consequences of his actions, and karma is haunting him. I wouldn't look for anything complicated about it. It's practically talked about a lot in other chapters as well.

  • AllFatherOmnis
    AllFatherOmnis2 years ago
    回復 NovaEre

    Hello. Thank you for the review. It's just a pity you didn't write more. I'm relatively new to novellas, and I crave every opinion and every mistake I make. Honestly even I know this novella isn't great. Maybe not even good. And that's why I want to keep improving. I don't know where you ended up, but with a better understanding of the world, I would have read at least to chapter 15 and then written a review here. Thanks a lot for the review, and good luck.

  • AllFatherOmnis
    AllFatherOmnis2 years ago
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    First of all, I'd like to thank the author for a job well done and not a sloppy typical novel. The length of the novella is adequate for me and it is a nice read. The beginning is very interesting. The characters are well-written and it unfolds nicely. Keep up the good work, and as an author, I wish the author lots of luck and written words. I will be reading the novel and will be rooting for it. :)

  • AllFatherOmnis
    AllFatherOmnis2 years ago
    回復 Vhaeron

    Nope my friend. I saw 7DS a long time ago, so I don't know. Quite a coincidence I see.

  • AllFatherOmnis
    AllFatherOmnis2 years ago
    回復 AllFatherOmnis

    After all, you get to know someone who puts in the work. Nowadays, finding a normal and good novella is a superhuman feat :D

  • AllFatherOmnis
    AllFatherOmnis2 years ago
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    The chapters are long and I like that. I don't like the novella type of a few words and then the end. Big plus. The world is beautifully written too, the characters are well written. So far 2 episodes but I rate very positively. I'll keep reading, and thanks for the good work ;)

  • AllFatherOmnis
    AllFatherOmnis2 years ago
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    Actually, the book cover made me click on it :D But I've read 3 chapters and I have to say I'm enjoying it. The beginning was quite different than others I've read and also great. Keep it up ;)

  • AllFatherOmnis
    AllFatherOmnis2 years ago
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    It's beautiful to read. The beginning drew me in immediately. The description of that world, the construction of that world is fascinating. I finally found something that made me want to read on. Keep it up!

Phantom of Hatred

Lucius Cain had already been abandoned from birth and abandoned to his fate. He was raised by the people of the street, who constantly changed and changed. Every day he grew up, and every day he saw only pain and suffering. But his unknown power grew with him. At the age of 12, he killed for the first time. Why? Because it seemed like the right thing to do. The thing everyone else was doing. The thing that seemed right to him. At 16, he was drafted into the army. No family. No strings attached. No problems. That's when he sensed his potential for killing. Killing without a shred of restraint and without a shred of compassion. His geniosity and power took him to the King himself in just a year. To the High Society, he hated so much. Offered the position of Chief Captain of the 12 Knights. Which he refused, thus ruining his career in the army. But Cain had a different goal. He didn't want to lead armies. He didn't want to take care of armies. He just wanted to kill. He joined the Underworld, where he quickly became the number one of the Underworld Twelve. Driven by a hatred of the world that he vented through death. Known for slaughtering the Estagardian Royal Family and, with them, an army of a thousand men. Later, Cain became the most powerful in the entire Kingdom of Sedruan. It took until he was 26 years old to recognize... Love. He left his post, let go of his hatred, and let the waves of love guide him. After two years of a beautiful, peaceful life with the love of his life, Sophia Caddel, he was robbed of his love at the age of 28. And with her death comes revenge. And with revenge against the world, he returns again... As the Phantom of Hatred.

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