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Neat!
Lovely chapter
You said to correct grammer so don't get mad but you wrote hair when you almost certainly meant air
Lovely chapter as always. Nice to see what the end of Kevin's rope looks like.
Yay! New Chapter! I quite liked the moves Kevin used especially the last one. I also like how we got narrative pay off for the bag of holding having an ocean in it.
You accidentally said Team B instead of Team C. I know this is a mistake because you actually use Team C for who they fight
You spelled her name wrong here
While it is true that they aren't as powerful in the "real" world I still think they would have beaten Bakugo (if they were not holding back specifically to avoid that. Where they specifically doing that?)
Nice chapter overall! It was good to get some action and I am looking forward to seeing Dante's pov during the exam proper.
See having just the one onemonopeia here stops it from looking weird. so this is a nice change from the early chapters