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Why are you resolving a situation and then going back and reliving it afterwards
This book is very interesting. It could use a little more attention since there are some spelling errors and some wrong use of names. But the author gets better with every chapter.
To be honest, if this part of the story has become repetitive. So I am glad that you are spreadin through. I almost stoppe reading for a bit because the story lost the pull it had. It is starting to come back though. Keep up the hard work
Very compe storyline. I appreciate that you update frequently
The first volume was pretty good pacing with plenty of action. The gear shift into backstory that is slow to develop so far is less pleasing. Looking forward to it all coming together.
The Mc has too many skills to list every time