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Paragon of Death

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Life from birth has been nothing but hell. I lost my parents to some stupid aristocrats whom they offended. Executed for no good reason. My relatives abandoned me and pushed me aside. They feared for their lives and left me and my sister to starve and wander the streets alone! No, this is worse than hell! I watched my sister die of starvation. Her lips were dry and her feet bloody. Her nails were broken and her fingers riddled with cuts. She struggled in my hands and after a few seconds of struggle she passed away. She seemed joyful in death so I prayed mine will come just as swift and merciful as hers. So I stayed in the alleyway, alone with her rotten corpse awaiting my fate for God knows how long. I could see it already. The darkness encroaching from all sides Everyone said death is scary but I say it's the end! Who needs life after death? What is the need for reincarnation? Who would want to return to this crazy world? "It's not yet time for you to go... You have one more task to accomplish as my host" A voice called out to me. I could barely see or speak but how can I miss such a beautiful face? It was an extremely handsome man who gazed at me with tender eyes. "Haven't I suffered enough? Can't I just rest?" I cried out. Why would I want to stay back in such a cruel world? "Don't you want to avenge the death of your parents? Don't you want to become something greater? I can make that happen!" The beautiful man said with an alluring voice. "You... Who are you?" I asked with an anxious heart. My parents always said God is the only one who cares about me! Maybe in my final hours, he has come to save me. "Call me Death..."

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2 :3 Star sect
3 :The Invasion
4 :Thosuand years Arc
5 :Greatest Evil
6 :Final Task

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Yarakiri
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The story is really cool to follow, even if sometimes the mc's arrogance is a bit boring, it's ok. I'm not going to criticize the grammar, I don't feel good enough for that ^^'. The only downside that I find is that there are some inconsistencies and passages that are not too logical that would require a little proofreading like just for example the name of the mc which changes from one paragraph to another. *The sequel contains SPOILERS* During the fight against Kyle he reveals his true identity quietly just to show himself. Can't he just sneak attack instead of wasting time? If Kyle runs away instead of fighting, can't he tell the world who he is? Otherwise there's a moment when he beats the vampire Kyle but I don't know why he doesn't kill him straight away when he's in front of everyone, okay the other one doesn't want to kill him but why he takes the risk of speaking without real logic if you wanted to speak, do it during the fight when you were playing hide and seek with the shadows. At any time Kyle shouts to everyone his true identity. You describe a very intelligent evil mc but he is sometimes so stupid all of a sudden for no valid reason, it's a shame. Also the part where he understands that he will have to kill Lucy doesn't tell me that he really forgot Klien... It's just you who forgot him. Last passage and after I stop but at the beginning of the novel we are told that vampires do not have a soul that the mc can recover (I may have misunderstood but it seemed clear to me) and yet after that there is no There's no more problem with a single vampire. There have been other passages like that which are a little illogical and which stand out from the rest for no valid reason. *End of spoilers* Otherwise, overall it's a good read. Eager to read what follows !

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