Tobirama_uchiha777

author cooked a lot today let's gooooooooo

The pov switches seems seamless so far ,well I find it imp to cover the perspective of other characters but sometimes it gets tad bit overdone (which is not the case here so far) Maybe you can involve povs of other characters too Like his father ,hokage and his colleagues in the future ( The most anticipating moment in my opinion would be his meet with kakashi and Minato I so fucking want to read his battles with them And I think after getting enough power he shouldn’t hide his genius from the village (as leverage it can be very useful as Yamanaka do not have that much power compared to uchiha and hyugas )

This fic is a fresh breath of air apart from the usual fics WBNVL has (Chinese trash or one with bad grammar or with a ridiculous and cliched storyline) read till Chapter 10... the fic is amazing .... it's something unique, setting apart from the usual Senju or Uzumaki or uchiha or clanless orphan trope This fic's really tryna cover something else, Yamanaka. the characterization and thought process till now is great... mc is a genius and isn't hiding I hope that author-san will keep on updating and not abandon this Would recommend it 100 percent

bit cringe bro ain't gonna lie as it felt rushed and forced

This is such a fucking retarded fic Idk how come a SI can be so retarded ,he willingly leaves Kansas for Gotham and that too nigga has no powers and then nigga loses his powers again after getting ghost rider’s powers How the fuck does people believe this fuckwit’s fics His old fics were atlast bit readable but this is beyond retardness This fic is worse than ksi’s new song

bruhh wtf is going on with this cliched thing bro chose this and then cries about it 🤣

i still didn't understand why'd he do it... seems bit extreme and bit dumb at same time

ultimate move hiroshima and Nagasaki bomb attack whisker blast blast blast

He doesn’t have that talent tbh Neither does he practice