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Every time i read this I get the VERY strong impression the author wanted to play the hunger games and hasn't quite figured out how to sell it to themselves yet.
just a gut feeling Flynn is going to be scarry
poor dragons... they know not their sins.
where is the dedicated WN place? your notes often lead to fun small discussions so I'm curious where I'll have to look for that.
I approve. This should be fun. Poor dragons 🫣
Wasn't he supposed to be a nerd on earth? I read slime and immediately thought of at least three stories I've read in the last year where slime's and Kirby are essentially the same thing. A universe devouring, immortal, apex predator.
a fae like character would be a rather appropriate absolute being and an excellent addition to the demon butler trope. Ray does need a figurative angel on his shoulder still especially after losing his emotional depth.
"*Ser'ith's* face further paled" right?
not necessarily, the class is all about being an unknown. killing off an identity should just increase that mystery. it would mean all the secrets of that identity would die with it and because they aren't really dead he could make them appear at critical moments like a guardian spirit only raising more questions and uncertainty.
all iIknew was that the Goliath sized leaps of logic used by Rey and Adonis were dumb and I was going to judge you as the author harshly if it wasn't something else. that being said we are a ways into this and it's pretty clear at this point when you're begging us to look away from your hands so you can switch the proverbial cups.