Gaming_Account_5469

ok, now I've read everything available and this is my second review so I won't repeat myself, I haven't been disappointed when reading this and I still find this one of the best reads on this site. All I've got are some cool adds I've would've liked to see 1. I would've liked to see more of the other hosts perspectives in some of the situations they were put in. Mainly after once Damon leaves hell (example the host of life vs the pope) would've been amazing to see what sort of feelings he was going through when fighting (the man did kill his brother after all). This is why I found the battle when Damon revealing himself to be the coolest in this novel (great job on that battle by the way👌) 2. Please fill the five year gap when Damon was in hell with what happened to his friends, how the Duke recovered mentally, or any sort of impact he left on the characters. I mentioning this because because I thought this would be great for a couple of bonus chapters in the future if u ever fill like making them 3. add blinks backstory, I know it's said in the story but the events he's put through could've hit harder if there was more context to their relationship. I'm mainly talking about his village being attacked. that's it, again none of this is criticism, just suggestions for the future because I really loved this novel and I am gonna start reading more of your works

error... I think? (I was going (on leg) gather)

I do like Lucy but...

it will be cool to see how they grow in the future because I've always had the belief the the elements were equal in power

but won't the old man's soul return to the cosmic spirit if he dies?

YES! he finally realised. am I the only one who thought the hosts really only needed each other

lol "frow" 😆

maybe the longer they develope (age) the more their soul grows or its to keep the story more interesting

probably lieing to make it sound cooler to the enemy