webnovel
1660024223218
shootingstar27

shootingstar27

Lv1

Hi , everyone I'm your Author Mae . I'm 16 yrs old and will soon be a writer.

2022-03-06 加入Philippines
-d

寫作

27.9h

閱讀

128

閱讀作品

徽章
4
動態
8
  • shootingstar27
    shootingstar272 years ago
    發表

    this is my honest review the flow of the story is good, every chapter is long and that is a good thing .however there are some errors and some of it are really confusing especially when you expressed the MC life. So I hope you would be more careful on expressing the MC life that is clear and interesting.

  • shootingstar27
    shootingstar272 years ago
    發表

    Hi everyone!! I'm an author shootingstar27, 16 years old. I hope that you like my first novel, this novel will take you to a magical place where werewolves, witches, elves, ancient magicians, and humans coexist.

  • shootingstar27
    shootingstar272 years ago
    發表

    One thing that I like about this novel is, Is how you deliver what the MC doing, and thinking and also how you deliver it as a narrator. every chapter is long and it's a good thing also every title of your chapters literally would make the readers curious and excited to read more of it. to be honest it is my first time reading about a transmigration novel about modern sports. it feels unique and new to me.

  • shootingstar27
    shootingstar272 years ago
    回復 BrewingFantasies

    thank you for your honest review ❤️☺️🥺

  • shootingstar27
    shootingstar272 years ago
    發表

    I really like sci-fi stories and your novel is very interesting, it has a nice plot ,and a well written story ,I hope you can update more chapters to promote your novel❤️☺️

    該書已被刪除。
  • shootingstar27
    shootingstar272 years ago
    發表

    I like the plot and the story ,but you should make every chapters longer and keep on updating so your novel can be promoted . You can also make some interesting praises in the beginning and the end of every chapter.

  • shootingstar27
    shootingstar272 years ago
    發表

    the story is really interesting and the writing quality is amazing 🙂 for me a 16 year old writer and beginner I'm amazed ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  • shootingstar27
    shootingstar272 years ago
    發表

    the story is very good I want to read the next chapter ,and the writing quality really 👍😊 I want to read the next chapter do badly ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Taming the obsessive tyrant

Celine Llanna Lancster.An illegitimate daughter of the duke was adored by her parents. With her beauty that was enchantingly demure and angelic. An innocent girl who doesn't know much of the world, she had caught a lot of attention and captured the hearts of many, and one of them was the dashing crown prince of the Pedalion empire. An accidental encounter, there she met the young crown prince who's been assassinated by a certain person. The crown prince of the Pedalion empire, Lucian Hyacinth Blackwell. The last descendant of the Pride king of werewolves, fell for sweet and innocent charm. The two became friends and soon fell in love with each other. At a young age, the two vowed to never forget each other as they parted. Remembering those precious memories, the two live their lives at a complete distance far away from each other. As time flies by, the vow that they made will soon turn into betrayal. Misunderstandings and lost memories will slowly change their lives. Turned one of them into an obsessive tyrant. EXCERPT: A full moon gives a bright light in the night sky, With the cool breeze of the rising spring, a soft gust of wind blew the falling leaves as they flew with the windy flow in the air. A young woman who's rushed packing her clothes in her suitcase, with a worried expression on her face, planned on fleeing before the sun rises. Celine who was in a hurry running down quickly on the staircase while carrying her small suitcase paused and was shocked as she step back trembling in fear. The man who was standing right in front of the back door chuckled and stared at her teasing, As he walked towards her, slyly smiled while holding handcuffs in his right hand. "My dear Celine! Do you think you can run away from me?" Lucian sighed as his right lip curved and make a smirk, but Celine who was desperate to escape him gambled her life. As she run across towards him avoiding his gaze, yet didn't work .his hands grabbed her wrist and hugged her tightly in his arms while putting the handcuffs on both of her hands. While he's mi at her back, Celine continued to resist his grip, then stopped as she can feel him leaning his face onto her right ear. "Please stop! Let me go!" she begged, trembling and keep resisting his grip. As he hugged her tightly while licking her earlobe, teasing her as he whispered into her ears sweetly. " Darling Celine, you can't run away from me, you are mine, body and soul" he whispered. Placing his face onto her neck then kissed it lightly as he leaves a kiss mark on her pale skin. Celine's shoulder tenses up as he licks her neck slowly, enjoying the situation he mumbles. "What should I do to make your stay?..should I lock you up and hid you somewhere no one can see this beautiful face of yours!" he commented, while Celine who was avoiding his gaze cried, as her 5th attempt at escaping him failed. Celine who was an illegitimate child of an aristocratic family became the Tyrant's Obsession.

shootingstar27 · 历史言情
分數不夠
30 Chs

Marrying my sister's fiancee

Chartiana Feliz Alpin, Tiana for short, was one of the top-notching students who graduated with outstanding academic achievements to a prestigious royal academy. As soon as returned home. her parent surprised her with their devastating news. As her brother used all their money for his vice gambling addiction and was indebted a big amount of money to an Aristocrat family. Her sister Margaret Laurel eloped with its lover on another empire before the wedding and subsequently her brother also flees when the lender demands his payment and leaves his family in a crisis of bankruptcy. Living her brother's debt as her parents were the guarantor, they were forced to pay for his brother's debt in just a day. Chartiana have no choice but to marry her sister's fiance and give up her dreams on becoming a business woman. But the main problem is, she and her sister are the total opposite especially on everything but of course she's more prettier than her sister. As she agreed to their condition, Chartiana was sent off to her fiancee's estate and as soon as she met him, her eyes widened in disbelief as the man who was in front of her was one of the most handsome mining the empire, also this man she was going to marry was nothing but the most annoying man who made her known as the academy's ‘Luckiest girl of all and the most hated one. Chartiana wanted to call off the agreement but she had no choice but to marry her rival and spent her three years being married to him. However, the moment she spent her days with him as his wife, the more she wanted to escape their marriage. But was it really because she hated him? or because she wanted to hide the truth about her being a just a replacement? These uncertain feelings she felt for him made her hesitant to escape his husband's teasing of her. “Can I call you honey? or would you prefer to be called Darling?” he asked while teasingly hugging her in his arms as he kissed her pale neck lightly, her shoulder suddenly tensed up while avoiding his stare. " He loves to tease someone, is he? But why are my eyes constantly changing and Why do you keep coming every night!" Wondering how can't he seems doesn't get bored teasing her, she can only wish that she can leave this place. But in the end, will she still want to end their marriage? or continue to become its wife?

shootingstar27 · 历史言情
分數不夠
4 Chs