I love fanfiction with op mc and some 18+ content 😁
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That "cell division technology" was the least taught out scientific research yet.🤣
Is he f#cking his mother or sister? Insest?
Beginning was really good but when the canon starts the MC just start having amnesia or just start giving illogical excuses 😒 also in this review i just realised, this author is a ass. Bro you have no creativity, accept that fact and improve. You got no idea how to change the plot, pretty sure you didn't even make a plan before writing, i recommend reading a JJK fic where the mc is also megumi and it's a WC or a huge haram fic, yet it is just perfect, bro knows what he's doing unlike you. You have so much forced people plot and unexplained plot holes that it's not even funny. And you don't even read/reply you chapter comments 😒 people are telling you about your mistakes from the beginning but you just don't care 😑 i guess advising someone who doesn't want to improve is just a fool's errand.
This is just JJK with a bit more powerful megumi, and it's annoying as hell. In the beginning, you don't realise it since the canon hadn't started at that point. But from the very beginning of canon he starts to act like he has amnesia. Forgetting vital knowledge 😕 and giving stupid excuses to not change the canon bro just say you don't want the canon to change 😒 you say i want to do that and prevent this yet all you. Do is make super forced plot where the plot is just not charged. Writing quality is great but you have to admit this sad fact that, author of this novel has very mediocre creativity and imagination. (Sorry btw) Also most annoying characters are when the MC just wastes his curse energy (even though yuta was doing just fine) and letting geto escape. And we also saw him saw "I won't let it happen again" when his sis got cursed 😒 and then proceeds change nothing in the chapter called "vessel" it was sooooo forced...... Ahhh 😫 it's painful to read ( you can turn your brain off and it'll not bother you).
I am really confused that there's not that many Waifu catalogue fics in webnovel, considering how many degenerate there's in this site. All those stupid multiverse stories, yet no masterpiece like this one. We want more! Yes, i know about QQ, AO3 and FF.com. BUT I WANT MORE! Great fanfic by the way. 👍 Good job. Don't drop it or I..WILL...FIND YOU!!
Ok. I'm out. Nothing changes, having so much power yet not being able to change the plot 😕 this chapter was so forced, it's not even funny. I can understand geto leaving alive (even though it was very unlikely) but this chapter was too forced, i mean really? How does him not having the finger effect his meeting with him grandpa? What kind excuse is that? Very poor writing, didn't expect it from you man 😔. I can think of 10 scenario where the same goal is achieved but the plot isn't as forced.
MC is really giving me that emo cringe vibe. "Taking away my freedom" "shaping me into someone I'm not" stupid talk like this makes me want to quit. Emo piece of sh1t.
It's well written but the plot is so random, from the very beginning the plot is weird. The character's are not consistent, their personality doesn't match with the book. The time skip seems misplaced. The plot is not engaging. Even though the MC is OP, he has such shallow goals. I understand that the author was trying to do something new but it's too wild and boring. I mean it's not a typical OP MC fanfic, nor is it a well thought out story. It doesn't follow any consistent theme. So I'm dropping this.
Best translation ever. You did a great job bro. A 10/10 translation. The author is probably asexual (rejects raven,Emma and has zero attraction towards any women). But the story was well written and edited. Thanks for the hard work.
The heck is wrong with Chinese people? Just cause he has small 'D' he rejects everyone 😑 what the hell man. It's like he's asexual. This is one of the best Chinese fanfic I've read but MC not having any interest in women is a huge red flag for me. All the talk about love is really pissing me off.