Banjo_The_Fox

killed a dog, done. Eat shit.

alright, I like this story, I like this plot, I like the characters but the overuse of ! is throwing me off with it.

the exclamation points, chill!

It's good but when did he learn to use water? and why do you have such an overuse of exclamation points? !

What he just did is peak retard.

I like it but the constant injection of author notes throws off the vibe, can't immerse yourself in a story like that

MC is not the MC, he's just a viewer, a tool for the reader, he does nothing at all which is a shame because I love this trope and really wanted to like this, the RGR trope is far too rare.

Permanent blessing scrolls seem OP, wouldn't that basically make the Pope or the very richest living demigods?

Solo a D rank as a student or be expelled? Like 50 chapters ago it was said most people never achieved higher than D, feels like that's too high an expectation for an academy that's considered one of the worst

MC seems way too weak with having this system, only neck and neck after a year of training with such an OP system? They're both still kids, seems like Shye should be much stronger