ViolGrande_69

Talking about that, what do you think I should change except the mentioned above, like example should e change to 3rd person POV or just try to give more definition at the mc does and conversation regarding how he met people and also conversation with them? I welcome any suggestion btw.

<3 yep I just done some research in google and also asked my Father the deference of Katana, Tanto, and chokuto and understand it for quite a bit Thanks for reminding and pointing that out Bro.

LOL, i just loved to use that words, if you don't know it is the most used words Sonic used LOL

the bob I know is cool tbh LOL

Chunin can make 3 but it is not used in combat because it will drain their chakra so much it will become an hindrance that's the reason only Naruto can do it when he is a training for rasen shuriken.

Garo? is it an anime? or a manga series, never heard of it sorry.

here are the mask I just found out from my friend that people who read the books from google web cannot see the paragraph comment, so I will make a discord server to give them the pics I send in the future.

I was actually thinking of making he own his own dojutsu but scrape it because how cringey it gets I Haven't got any idea to make an original one, well maybe in the future we will see I guess.

Lol, No actually that is how Japanese people introduce them self it is still present to this day. They introduce their Surname or family name first then they said their full name so that's why japanese always said Family name-san or something.

well he is yet he isn'... actually the group just grouped up on sasuke because if anyone ask him they will get turned down immidietly so yeah