MaskPerson_1366

I was thinking about this setup for ages. BUT, here it is and dropped. can it be more disappointing.

I like the story. its different than other novels. just update more..................................................................

+1

dude, this guy read 30 chapters of the book then why the fuck, he says "where am I" after the ritual. "with shaky hand touch the red point" if MC have knowledge of future at beginning and act pathetic then what he will do later on. author, the MC character should be arrogant, confident and a bastard at the beginning of story when he knows the future. if the person knows what will happen in the "book" they have to see themselves better than the "characters" subconsciously.

Really good but slow update-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

good potential, interesting background. do not give up.............................................................................................

its great work. shame you dropped it. 1 year on hitus. probably shouldnt expect anything from this book. but this great book which you can connect with many fiction or stories over such as merlin, Hablo the foul, hogwarts founders.

This work is great until now and its really promising. keep going my man and do not listen to the useless haters comment. u can add world travel to this novel as well.

I think you are only writer that can make the one night stand so romantic and poetic.

yo you can add assissn creed organization or add hydra idea in there as well. later on think about learning magic or vampire stuff there as well. This stuff can make it interesting and you dont get bored of story. btw man you can make germany make all cool buidling like city inside the jungle or inside the mountain or something. or make some hidden country of elfs or other races living below earth. if you add stuff more than just history and add abit of fiction like demon slayer stuff or other stuff it can be more fun to write as well. of course do not discard your ideas. just food for thought