Sulfates_Cidif

I'm still working on the name, as it is not in actual starwars lore. I just made it up as part of my fandom. since starwars didn't have an alien species that fit with the mythos I wanted to incorporate into the story.

well, dam, you are right! odd when I read the lore, it said coruscant somewhere, but that might have been the other timeliness. sigh working with two different timeliness gets confusing... well anyway, good eye, I will make changes post haste!

sigh, no picture for a while, my tablet doesn't want to connect to the internet and it has all my pictured storage. Will work on it

their not shouting, think of the dots as beautiful language artistics when you read it, when the paragraph is a descriptive narrative but when their talking, the dots are used to emphasize those odd pauses when people do normal daily conversation. for example normal daily conversation: [sigh... ( pause) then continues (send a security team with the tech heads)] example of descriptive narrative: [ the night was young... and beautiful... the moon was full in her colors...] or [ as the eternal moonlight focused onto the forest...( pause) the ghost and tigers spoke as they hid from the drum beats...] I use the dots (...) to keep the flow and rhythm of the paragraph to make it sounds more dramatic-ish in your head when the reader reads it, at least that is my intention. I also think it pairs well depending on what song your listening to at the time, as you read. it's the same reason I use the word (for) alot or (as) it's to try to keep the rhythm.

[jusy] just

what do you mean? since chapter one ,it been nothing but the Mc, its jusy written with his ,[WOW] back story first... sure I could have made him super hype at the start like other books , then go back about his past Like others. once the book had a following but I didn't want to do that, plus it written in a way that wow lore lovers would enjoy....

fire alien, not an alien on fire XD

tell a tubbies xd

concept

his father