ZeroSerei

Thanks

First chap is a bit confusing with the narration, but it's pretty good apart from those issues

Furara, there is a time to do free hand and a time to use a staff to obliterate a demon general. Trust Hanjiro for once

let me hand you a power stone

How did you do the italics

Furara is adorable AAAAAAAA

"Yeah I'm hungry, what are we having for lunch?" Answer: You Two

Need more of Furara, especially her breaking out of those robes.

I would prefer if you added spaces in between dialogue for easier reading but all in all, this is pretty decent man!

it isn't a grammar error, don't worry! it's something wrong with my head for even imagining it given the context