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Does the author have multiple personalities?

I hope we time skip straight to his arrival back in Piltover, I came here to read an Arcane fic. If you must write about his time in Rapture, please keep it limited to flashbacks and please use them sparingly, I couldn't give any less of a s.h.i.t about a retelling of the game's events over the course of another 60 chapters.

I'm not saying he shouldn't care about them but calling them family that soon when they've barely had any experiences together is a bit much.

*buy*

Just but a big daddy to carry him.

This rule of three shit is driving me up the wall. Please Christ get a new trick. If you used it every once in a while, it'd be fine but you don't, you use every other bloody line.

The flashback feels like bullshit since his 'parents' have never had any significant effect on Lukas' feelings or character you've just chosen to asspull that now.

This rule of 3 shit in your writing is starting to get repetitive and annoying. Please try something new.

Another pointless chapter. If you're gonna keep pumping out carbon copies of cannon, I might as well just go watch the show instead.

Wasn't this whole chapter just a total rehash of cannon? What was the point?