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You're actually retarded.

Were you dropped on your head?

They're literally separate countries.

Plus Wong gave Wanda the location of mount Wundagore right? Or he gave her the darkhold? He did sometjing stupid to save a few sorcerers after the attack on the sanctum.

'Blud'

You seem to be saying that I'm wrong for complaining about the story being boring because the author has CHOSEN to hamstring himself by basing the story in England and making the first conflict with the UK government. In 20 chapters, the author has demonstrated 0 ability to make this an interesting setting or antagonist, if I was in the author's shoes I'd choose to write a story that has the potential to be interesting, I'd put Artoria in New York or Asgard or Omnipotence city, somewhere where she can interact with characters that are more interesting than government bureaucrats and where she can do more than sit in an empty throne room. The reasons that you have given to explain why I'm wrong are exactly why this fic is bad in the first place, the author has chosen the most boring plot point and characters and done nothing with them, there is no story here, it's just nothing, and I'm not surprised since this whole premise is a carbon copy of that ' Marvel: reincarnated as Goddess Rhongomyniad' fic, the only improvement is the writing quality, but the lack of any likeable characters or an interesting plot is identical. I don't think the author is capable of coming up with any original ideas and you need to get some self respect if you feel the need to defend this.

Author uses he and she interchangeably for Gareth even though Gareth is just female and has no gender dysphoria like Mordred and hasn't spent her whole life pretending to be male like Artoria. The author also keeps using plural pronouns 'they' to refer to a singular person (Artoria) even though the only pronoun anyone outside Camelot should be using to address her is 'he' since they're all under the impression that she is male.

Besides the constant, incorrect usage of pronouns, the writing quality is fine. Update stability is fine. Story development is non'existent, 20 chapters and several hours of reading in and all that's happened is Artoria had a pointless cross country trip, loitered in Camelot for a few days, had a meeting with some nobodies and fury and Coulson making the same reppetetive observations again and again instead of actually doing something, there is no story because no one does anything and when they do do something it's pointless or boring or both. Character design is sub par, 20 chapters 0 development the only ones with any personality are Agravain (moody bastard) Gareth (innocent, happy child) and Mordred ( energetic, violent, insecure brat) but none of this matters because none of the Characters have any goals or any interesting interactions with each other. World background is bad too, it should feel like one of the Marvel universes but it doesn't since the only Marvel characters so far are the S.H.I.E.L.D cast who don't even feel like themselves since they're acting more like an appendage of the UK government and the Ancient One who popped in for 2 minutes rambled some nonsense and then left. This fic is not worth your time and I regret reading it, a shame since it could've been good if even a single fucking thing happened in this story.