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DaoistDa7lcn

DaoistDa7lcn

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  • DaoistDa7lcn
    DaoistDa7lcna year ago
    回復 IndominsRexx

    我无敌后成了反派

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    DaoistDa7lcna year ago
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  • DaoistDa7lcn
    DaoistDa7lcn3 years ago
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    Looks like the real Leo is back from the dead?

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    DaoistDa7lcn3 years ago
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    Sorry for the mistakes i'm not a native speaker I have read a lot of harem novels and i just hope the harem is not too big (i would like to see up to 15 girls, less is better)... due to too many girls, there is too little time left for each of them ... their characters are not revealed, a significant part of the girls are discarded into dozens or even hundreds of chapters (you read a book and feel sympathy for some girls, and then the author discards them and replaces them with new ones) and at some point everything becomes more like collecting Pokemon than a romantic relationship, and as a result, girls who joined later very often have no uniqueness and look like clones of previous girls (with a different name and with some small changes) I like when there are not many girls and each with a unique appearance and personality, instead of a large number of uninteresting and unremarkable female characters

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    DaoistDa7lcn3 years ago
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    I really like Nina...

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    DaoistDa7lcn3 years ago
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    I'm not a native speaker, sorry for the mistakes this novel isn't bad, I've seen some writers helped by restarting the novel at a slower pace... restart on webnovel, royalroad and scribblehub ~1 chapter per day, add a harem tag and rewrite the reason why MCs are hated by others (something like red eyes are a sign of a demon)

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    DaoistDa7lcn4 years ago
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    I believe that forced marriages are no longer needed ... Although I love harems, Ning Jinying's character is so cute that you can do without a harem too)

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