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  • roffeewest
    roffeewest6 months ago
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    Well, the character is ambiguous, the pacifist and the Shinobi world do not go well together, the teachings of the Ninshu that were there are a good example. Plot changes are minimal, which is not very good, interesting and new are quite rare. Quite digestible fan fiction if you close your ears to nonsense about pacifism.

  • roffeewest
    roffeewest6 months ago
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    Well, this fanfiction will not show you anything about what you might think, not a brilliant strategist, not a brilliant inventor. Another system that was given to an extra who would not have done anything without it, and all the tasks are strictly to stop him near the plot. The story does not tell about the main character, but rather about the kind of war on the part of familiar characters.

  • roffeewest
    roffeewest6 months ago
    回復 BeixuanLovell

    I think you misunderstood something, 1 star is always because there is no correct rating quote on this site, everyone puts either 5 points if they liked it, or 1 if not. Especially for fan fiction, where uniqueness is reduced to 0, because interaction with the characters of the story is superficial and does not change the main line of the narrative in any way.

  • roffeewest
    roffeewest6 months ago
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    The main character is a slave of the system, I think in these words you have understood the main characteristics of the main character. 50% of the chapters are occupied by useless system messages, and the rest is reduced to describing actions and very little of the real plot. Pros: the main character is not reborn with a formed mindset, and there is a chance after hitting the iron plate that he will make sense of himself and his existence, but judging by the nature of writing this will not happen.

  • roffeewest
    roffeewest6 months ago
    回復 Anonny_Anonymous

    well, nowhere did it say that he was a genius, he himself achieved nothing, and the changes in the world are only the strength of the system, his strength in this case is 0.

  • roffeewest
    roffeewest6 months ago
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    of course, I am not an expert in the field of Naruto, but it seemed to me much more profitable to go to the village hidden in the grass for Karin's ancestor than to appear in front of the fake owner of the rinnegan.

  • roffeewest
    roffeewest7 months ago
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    how far-fetched is this, not my cup

  • roffeewest
    roffeewest7 months ago
    回復 Rtanj

    yes, but as for me, it's still stupid because he probably doesn't know that there is a killer behind him who, if anything, will back him up

  • roffeewest
    roffeewest7 months ago
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    it is strange, of course, that he attacked the Amazon from behind, and did not try to resolve everything with words, but okay

  • roffeewest
    roffeewest7 months ago
    回復 Abeeba

    will he join the original god as the chosen one of the outer god? It doesn't sound like a very smart decision.