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Highschool DxD: Perfection System!

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"Ah, darn it. I really don't understand anything," whispered a 14-year-old boy as he looked at his notebook. He was about to enter his vacation period, and he had some pending homework. Being the expert procrastinator he was, he chose the easy path. He left everything until the last moment! However, everything changes for him at the most opportune moment. Something that seems like a simple system to help him study at first, becomes the foundation of his new life! - The system is the foundation of this story, so it will be a recurring and essential element in the story as much or even more than the protagonist. If you don't agree with that, then it's better not to read this fanfic. - Mc is a Gary Stu

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BeixuanLovell
BeixuanLovell作者BeixuanLovell

Here's a shameless author giving five stars to their mediocre work. When it comes to writing quality, truth be told, my vocabulary is pretty average, I don't even speak English well despite studying languages, so there you go. I do what I can, and I like to encourage those who read my story to help me improve. As for update stability, well, I won't lie, I'm quite lazy, and if I see that university demands more attention, then I'll just want to rest and procrastinate all day. If you like the story, give it plenty of support, so I'll be less tempted not to upload chapters. The story's development is slow; I hate it when stories are so fast-paced that it feels like a friend is telling you something funny. I prefer things to take their time, so I can see what each character has to offer me. In character design, I won't lie, I'd like to improve on that. Sometimes I feel like they're all too flat, so I like to imagine subplots that I'll later write to add more depth, although in the early chapters of my stories, you'll always see that everyone is quite reducible to a concept. World design... It's DxD, so it's already pretty good on its own; that's something from the original author, not mine. As a final note, I like edgy protagonists and all, but I also like them to be human, not seeming like a mere emotionless machine throughout the novel. So expect that here, even if the MC isn't the type to express themselves much, it doesn't mean they don't think about what they want, etc. If you're looking for a lot of action, let me tell you, creating fights isn't my strong suit. And if you like everyone praising the protagonist as the strongest thing in the whole world, so do I, although I'll try not to exaggerate with that, heh.

roffeewest
roffeewestLv1roffeewest

The main character is a slave of the system, I think in these words you have understood the main characteristics of the main character. 50% of the chapters are occupied by useless system messages, and the rest is reduced to describing actions and very little of the real plot. Pros: the main character is not reborn with a formed mindset, and there is a chance after hitting the iron plate that he will make sense of himself and his existence, but judging by the nature of writing this will not happen.

Imperial_Fox
Imperial_FoxLv5Imperial_Fox

Shameless 1 star for the shameless author who gives himself a perfect review

DaoistOfeOTA
DaoistOfeOTALv4DaoistOfeOTA

Start was pretty decent but quickly went downhill out of the current 16 chaoters 3 of them could be filled solely with the nonsense the mc thinks plus author adds in 5 ocs in a world like dxd where there are already plenty of characters to choose from

breke_Henrique
breke_HenriqueLv1breke_Henrique

I found the protagonist's personality very pleasant, he is smart and developing, he makes mistakes and learns from them, something I didn't like was the evaluation magic, it was not given by the system to reveal so much information, and I think it should Take away the HP system, this doesn't work in real life unless he gets stabbed in the head he can have 100000 HP and he dies instantly. (there may be some errors because it was on Google Translate)

Demons_Ki
Demons_KiLv1Demons_Ki

10/10 A nice read so far.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

You_me_6195
You_me_6195Lv4You_me_6195

bro don't read this the mc's idiotby the way this is weak to strong

Mili_Neer
Mili_NeerLv1Mili_Neer

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Lolipop_Android
Lolipop_AndroidLv2Lolipop_Android

I've read most of the top-rated fanfics around here, and honestly, this one has a lot of potential. The MC doesn't stand out for his interactions with other characters, but his internal monologues and questions have a solid human basis that makes you truly understand his concerns. Honestly, he seems like an ordinary person who just wants everyone around him to be okay, and I appreciate that because there are already enough fanfics with antiheroes in the DxD world. The system is pretty well designed in some aspects; for example, there are no levels or silly missions that give you power indiscriminately. At least we're constantly told that the MC strives to improve his skills, although it must be admitted that the system is quite OP, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. In the synopsis, the author says that the protagonist is a Gary Stu, so at least he warns in advance, although so far he hasn't done anything to call him a "Gary Stu," it's more than clear that it's only a matter of time. In summary, it's a pretty interesting story that at least doesn't just focus on the obscene aspects of DxD and delves deeper into things that are more interesting. At least in my opinion.

perroelquelolea1
perroelquelolea1Lv4perroelquelolea1

I am using a translator First of all I really like your story and the rapid growth of the MC's power and how you write the way that his power increases rapidly but please make the MC investigate well the things that are related to the supernatural and also don't make it late a lot in making him realize that he is the only person with a system and also thank you very much for making the mc's personality incompatible with the fact of having to join a faction. I just hope that the mc remains independent and if he works for a faction be something like a mercenary please don't make the mc join a faction for the sister or something like that I beg you.

wolfgod223
wolfgod223Lv14wolfgod223

I like the story and the concept, but I don't like the character. I feel like his thinking is too extreme. and that he's close-minded instead of making Him smart, and his personality changed way too much from the first chapter. At first He was just like any normal kid, and then he became Batman😑 I'm gonna keep reading. For at least 5 to 10 chapters. After that, I don't know. I might change my review It. might get better or worse. I don't know. For now, this is my honest review.

Infinite_01
Infinite_01Lv2Infinite_01

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Outer_God_Azathoth
Outer_God_AzathothLv1Outer_God_Azathoth

MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!

Autumn_Mage
Autumn_MageLv13Autumn_Mage

I like this novel, I’m giving it 5 stars because someone else gave it a 1.

Darkiling
DarkilingLv1Darkiling

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Mongkikiii
MongkikiiiLv4Mongkikiii

this is a good novel author please dont drop it

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

Really good novel. There are obviously mistakes with the grammar and misuse of vocabulary, but if you can handle that to an extent, then you'll enjoy this novel, interesting use of the gamer system aspect, and something some what new.

SlickTrick
SlickTrickLv14SlickTrick

Amazing read. I always loved books with status and grinding, also being able to see the progress. I just hope that it dosnt get dropped

RonaldMcDongald
RonaldMcDongaldLv4RonaldMcDongald

Im enjoying the sory so far. I dont think people understand that he isnt reincarnated just given a system. Righting quality is good besides some minor spelling typos. They dialog is organic and natural. Mc is starting relized how narrow minded he has been and is developing.

TehStorm
TehStormLv4TehStorm

A good story. It's a "classic" system story though, so expect a lot of cliches and the character being a Gary Stu but it's a good read nonetheless. lllllllllllllllllllllllll

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