Hayden_Warburton

I'm enjoying the story, but oh my god is the spelling, grammer and punctuation driving me insane. My biggest pet hate is when some ones gender is completely wrong. is it he or she? Then there's this sentence that makes no sence at all 'sigh'

I believe its the opposing element. light exists due to the presence of darkness and only through light can darkness prosper.

I think he will do something to do with devouring light

did every race out their breed with vampires or what?

blood legion don't leave any traces. blooded blood I mean.

haha I can tell already those vines are probably not vines haha.

if I was in the mcs shoes, I'm telling you now this world would be skipped. deep dark sea with alien fish... nahhh I'm good thanks.

cia lost her parents, then taken in by pure and brainwashed. Then found her first freind only to see her distancing her self. then she looses all her memories. then she had them returned but also looses her recent memories as a consequence. not to mention the burden of seeing the future and helping the villian in her eyes who possibly took what little she had. I'm not saying her actions are right but I am saying that she is a charachter to be pitied as her life has been one massive unfortunate rollercoaster. honestly, putting your self in her shoes, I'm not sure how I would act because that would be enough to break an average individual.

slime or a wisp? I can't decide?

The ghoul from the woods that disappeared in the earth.