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Ulupong_Tan

Ulupong_Tan

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2020-09-09 加入Global
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  • Ulupong_Tan
    Ulupong_Tan3 years ago
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    I dont how you people judge novels and I dont know how this novel get all these high ratings. To be honest the broken english sentences was so bad I couldnt even understand the story. If it had been just a few grammatical errors then I could have tolerated it but it got worse and worse. I can even see similarities with the sentences here and with MTL. The story on the other hand was disappointing. Its good to have an OP MC but i dont think you understand how game systems really work. The MC gains rewards by signing in? What about leveling? What about quest rewards? What about achievement rewards? Gacha Rewards? Storage? and even the stats. When you only use the signing in thing here its not fully a system its just signing in. Dont even get me started on the "hidden identity bid", see usually cultivation novels rarely do this since well its a cultivation novel. You portrayed the MC as an overpowered character with no rival anywhere so why is there a need to hide the identity. And the fact is that you removed the essential part that the MC needs to grow which is to be challenged by someone stronger than him.

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    Ulupong_Tan3 years ago
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    Upon reading further i have realized that the MC became a bit gutsy but the story was all over the place. Its bad enough that the characters were not properly described along with the world, now they introduce an arc on top of an arc. I mean, that would be tolerable if it was the issue but no. The cultivation of the Enemy is always leaps and bounds ahead of the MC, the moment the MC gains a good cultivation a new enemy appears with a cultivation that has a very big disparity with the MC. It might look entertaining on Newb readers but for me, a cultivation enthusiast reader, this novel is nothing but trashy. I applaud the author for trying but you should first read other cultivation novels so that you know the process. Give the MC a time to grow and show its growth before introducing another problem not dumping it one after the other.

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    Ulupong_Tan3 years ago
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    i liked it up until 800+ but after reading more it hit me, the story has the same pattern over and over again each arc. The MC gets humiliated by enemies, gets a very sad tragedy, then gets strong for revenge, and it always repeat the same way. What annoys me the most is that after a nice character intro for the allies, the story made them basically useless even with their high cultivation, how stupid! Its basically entirely just for the MC meaning even if the allies get stronger they always get defeated for the MC to help them how annoying.

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    Ulupong_Tan3 years ago
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    i've read so many cultivation manhuas and novels that i cant even remember the count but i can honestly say that this story is not a cultivation story at least in my opinion. See having a this rank 1, 2 and so on with breakthroughs doesnt justify you to call it cultivation. Not to mention the bad story line regarding his family. The inconsistent power level range where in its not even consistent to the point where there is the rank for the MC but u cant tell anymore if he is strong now or not. And lastly your rank system is very bad. u have the rank 3 body, rank 2 dantian. rank 1 cultivator etc in just one person? Have you even read a couple of cultivation novels? Im disappointed in you people rating this high, try reading a real cultivation novel so you know the difference between this and the a real one

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    Ulupong_Tan3 years ago
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    EXTREMELY BOOOOOOORING! This novel is a collection of cliches. I could've been a greater story if the author added a bit more of an exciting attitude for the MC. A good story always demand a good growth which means some flaws hidden inside the MC. Are you telling that after hearing that you're nothing but an entertainment toy of the goddess, you do nothing and just go with it?

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    Ulupong_Tan3 years ago
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    I'm sorry but this was a no for me. The start was very promising but soon enough it go so but I lost my desire to read further. The battle scene transitions and descriptions were so bad I can hardly understand what the author really wanted to portray. Worst part about it was the fact that the title says surpass level 100 but after detailing a level 59 for the MC they just stopped telling his level and show his status. Then what was the point of this story if its not related to the title? There was this part with the elf hoot where she attacked everyone yet for some reason she was then put to trial even after engaging on an attack? *facepalm