Marfu_Mausul

I saw that the main character had become a licking dog, obeying whatever his lover asked. Come on, ask for one or two things or force one or two things, that's fine but this is too much To do what you don't like, even if it's your own family at some point you will definitely get angry

This is just my opinion, sorry if anyone is offended or offended. Thank you very much

you know what's interesting because all geniuses are arrogant at first, just think if MC isn't reincarnated, what's going on in his mind , fortunately he is a reincarnation whose thinking is superior to other children because this is not his first life and the foundation of his life is there he can think of reasons or whatever that, so I don't agree with this chapter because whether it's the ninja world, the world of war or whatever world, we can't teach a child like that,and i agree with inoichi in the next chapter he is just a child not a machine there are many better ways to teach lessons but using this method leaves scars that are hard to erase

firstly sorry if the wording is wrong or whatever, but I agree with some of the comments as fanfiction which in fact is always AU there is not much difference at the character level and almost exactly the same as the original character. This is surprising considering he is a reincarnation even though he didn't read 'Harry Potter' thoroughly but his previous personality definitely stuck and it disappeared in later stages I understand it can be called character development but why does it feel like he doesn't get better but instead follows Conan himself, those of you who read the original book will know how he behaves James Potter, honestly I don't like him especially the prank session with snap, it wasn't a prank or a joke but the insults, oppression, bullying that I see, I hope he's not like that because it destroys all his stories. Thank You

somehow I see him as a slave to fate, I mean he keeps talking about going against his own fate but because of that it also feels like he's easy to manipulate, too obsessed with destiny

you know the nerf is really okay, you should read fanfic fate dxd Which nerf is really extraordinary, you know that right? What do I mean

At first it was interesting with a concept like that and the choice of reincarnation which was very interesting but unfortunately the execution was really lacking, it's like reading Chinese fanfiction

Ahhhh.....why!!!!!.....huhu I'm looking forward to the next chapter

I don't want to explain it or anything, but yeah, political issues like this aren't for me, so I think this chapter is a bit unsatisfying, don't judge Okay, I'm not saying this chapter is ruined, bad, or anything, it's just not satisfying for me, but I still appreciate it maybe for the progress of the story or not

to be honest, for this chapter I don't like it a bit but it's still good....enthusiasm, friend Thanks for the chapter