marveya

Your comment wasn't harsh, it was even a bit funny to me. I also saw it as a form of constructive criticism. I am happy that you find my novel good.

In my defense, that was my first time writing that kind of scene. I am just bad in writing anything action in general. But I think I improved in the later chapters. When I am done writing the whole novel, I will go back to edit the chapters. So please, pardon me

Girl don't attack the girl being cheated with ,attack the one who cheatedddd. break his freaking head with a bottle or sumtin

It was used in ancient China to determine paternity. Though it was quite inaccurate in some cases.

Thank you

hiiiiii

You are welcome ❤. Sorry for the late update, been quite busy lately.

All my characters were made that way for a reason and some of them including the main character will go through character development. But I am glad you at least gave it a chance. Thank you✨

you are welcome

😂that's what I thought about to when writing the scene