NaphtaIi

Very interesting start! Don't be shy let's have some more!!!

although i love it so far I don't know if they would use those curse words. If you use those already in Star Wars that'll be great!

Good job on this one!

I don't know about this because I don't think anyone in their right mind would convict someone just because they were a apart of something that changed to being bad later on, however the Jedi were blind so I'll let it pass.

I don't think he says "hmmm," all the time but aight

It's that guy Kenobi 🙏🏾

Love how you made her very curious almost to the point of annoyance, it is very much like her when I first saw her!

thanks for the chapter, hope to see longer ones tho 😄

I'll assume his name is Dagger haha

omg piell is in here