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The atmosphere and theme is fire, reminds me of eastern magic, not xianxia but related. There’s stakes and tension, instead of letting the Mc grovel in some corner, jk. After reading the chaps and introduction of mysterious person, yeah this will be a good story. Though the parts that stuck weirdly was the pacing, a bit dragged, which might be intentional but who knows. And dialogues just need more spunk, more easy-following, at earlier first chaps, but other chaps did not have this. That’s it, happy writing, author. Happy reading, reader.

HUAHAHAHAHA! | HAVE TAKEN THE FIRST REVIEW. BOW! BOW! Jokes aside, maybe. I liked the concept and character, the mystery. Pizzazzzz. Some parts may feel wobbly, some things rushed and squeezy— even such inconveniences might just be the experience too. So 5 for you, and 5 for everyone. And 10 for me because always rate yourself higher. Happy reading.

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He is strange, very conflicted within. He is good, he is bad, he is sometimes neutral, and has many, many beliefs about things, specific and grand things.

READ THIS BOOK AND GO BEYOND. Are you tired of these books with some flaw here and there or well EVERYWHERE? Come here, and bam bam bam. You shall see a wonderous wonder, cultivation, background, characterization, and well... Hot members of the female species if you know what I mean. EXPEXPEXPEXPEXP

And plus, I not revealing why his special until the very end

I explained each of those things seperately, through multiple and later chapters. The threat outside the walls are also hinted first of all, then gradually introduced, especially during this arc

What would you say you don’t grasp