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'Protect my love one whatever' why keep using these same phrase over and over. When read this phrase on hundred of novel already made the reader feel bored especially so when the writer keep using it a lot in the same novel. I think just put some hint on the mc action that he was protective person is already enough. No need to point it out so often as it already cliche as it is. Writer already exposed everything from the get go making me felt there are no really anything to look forward too. Better keep mc new ability secret a little bit making the MC looks more cool and mysterious. I just read few chapter but gonna guess that the MC gonna solve every matter on his own. If there are no unexpected twist this gonna be disappointing.Hope not because I'm gonna keep reading this one. It just my opinion hope it helps.
why always about street thug and a gang? At best some random villain mutant that show up for mc convenient . how about go after politicians and big shot entertainment industry. Pretty sure there will be many dark thing happening behind the scene. How about some romance , this is too lonely 😭