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the English is good but the character is already doing things the most full grown wizards wouldnt even try like If you think turning into an animal is dangerous try messing with ur brain mcgonagall. it leaves me concerned that the character will be so ridiculously overpowered that any problems or conflict they encounter will be redundant since they'll solve it easily

the fic has some issues key of which is how quickly the mc integrates himself in the group while trying to be mysterious and failing at it. but while failing the story likes to refer to him as mysterious for some reason and the characters have odd moments as a result like people thinking he's hiding things after exchanging 10 words with the mc. it's just awkward and is the totality of the mcs character

I haven't read the fic yet but this does sound off putting considering the only benefit of switch armors is the they are much easier to mass produce

just and additional note for anyone wonder I went ahead to ch 80 and it's still a thing so don't expect it to go away anytime soon

it's a good story but the whole bad english trope is so annoying it makes me not want to read

I'm not one for early reviews as a rule but less than 10 chaps out and I'm already interested it's great so far I'd definitely recommend

thanks for the chap

that's not possible author ice and other chakra natures are exclusive to bloodlines my guy