EIo_Police

pls, pls, pls learn the difference between his/her, him/her and he/she. u misuse them so often, it becomes bothersome to read your story. u could also just write in your native tongue and translate with DeepL to English.

*it is...

difficult to carry? what level of stupidity ha he reached?

his name is changing each cahptwr

???

surely someone notices a child in an orphanage dying.

so, ppl can only be invited into the game, but an antagonistic group can freely dispatch its members into it? cmon...

the story was so good until now...

its legit impossible for writers to not kill parents at the beginning.

7 ist not even close to many. a totally normal number.