JOSE1970

the author here its took a wrong rute. its true that warp drive and a teleport system have some points in common but no that many. both take the main idea of changing matter to energy and energy to matter. but also its where it end the similarity. a warp drive also make that energy to move faster than the ligth, allowing a star travel. in startrek there are 3 systems that use the same idea of changing matter and energy. one the warp drive, the teleporters is the second and the replicators are the last one that i remember. although the replicators use some basic matters to create anything that its programed to do. here the author is not making the mc to created a warp engine, but a teleporter. its the same with the quest. creating 1000 warp engines and 10000 suscefully teleporting ?? that its point

i dont specially like how you are working out the last chapters. too much troubles and ups and downs. i am almost thinking in droping the novel. just keep the main story and forget those sideways that you are doing

i am getting tired about the dual side of the novel. the mc its working to get his store known and better than any other in the world, but no to said in the multiverse where its. but why the mc has to spend soo much time in his games. he is op in the reality, why working so much in the game. also i could undestand if its training but he doesnot get anything from it. he should move or act more outside the store it getting bored this way

well i can understand your needs but could you post the date of when did you wrote. that its for the people to know when you would be come back good luck out there

i do believe that this novel perhaps has some future, but the author is making too many round around chapters. the mc in the first 40 chapters is doing almost nothing, just talking and getting from one place to another. but it doesnt take value to the novel, just some background. but almost 30 chapters of these make the novel boring.

its a game`s instrution manual ??

just keep writing, i believe that you are doing great

i cant agree with this chapter. his master needs a medicine, he has something that can cure and he is thinking that it will not be enougth??. whatsoever happens later it should be more than clear

i have to said: author you are so much anoying with this mc. how could draw so insecure person in this novel.

ok a question now how we reach the next chapter??, or also a better one how we can read the olders chapters?? also the index is not available now!!!!