blackout6661

Don't read this authors novels he never finishes them and changes the plot so much that the book eventually becomes unreadable. characters go missing plot holes everywhere, repeat chapters, and other stuff. I tried one of his other novels (Dungeon King: my goblins have captured countless female players), and that novel also started out well until the paywall, where the author changed the plot, where the title has nothing to do with the story, then at around chapter 488 it turns into this story for the next 200 chapters with the book saying it's completed. This novel also says completed when I can tell it's not since I've read the chapters from the other book. The author is a scam. I believe he is copying/pasting and posting stories from someone else, and when that story stops getting updated, he makes his story complete here and takes our money/coins.

The book started off good with a good plot. Then, the author decides to scrap the original plot after 38 chapters for something completely different. Many things are just randomly added and then taken away, the same with characters. Many characters have the same name. The name of this story should be changed to something else because goblins only take 1 female. Says Earth was selected, and billions of people "joined the game," yet it seems like the heroes were there before the dark lords since some were already very prevalent to the "NPC's." The whole game aspect was pretty much thrown out the window in the new plot with some of its features returning only when the author deems it necessary. The tag says R18, so I understand you will have NSFW scenarios, yet when the new plot started, it was like that in every other chapter, and then you stopped doing that. A good part of the beginning of the new plot timeline, most chapters had many repeated pages and paragraphs. In many instances in the story, the MC makes no sense in doing things. He will go on an adventure, find someone, bang them into submissions, take them home, bang them again, then deny that person from following him because it's to dangerous yet take someone weaker with him to make them stronger only to repat the process. Many of the characters are bland and have really no impact other than when they are needed, disappearing randomly, only to be written back into the story when the MC needs their help with something.

started out good, but once the chapters had future stuff explained and repeated multiple times and chapters not making any sense from one another, i just wanted it to end. some chapters repeated things multiple times, some said one thing than said another in the very next chapter, and also it seems like there were chapters missing, and it jumped from one thing to the next without explaining what actually happened

Was good other than a few grammar things. I just finished reading the "completed" story and the last 100 or so chapters you gave up. You have multiple chapters for things that didn't need multiple chapters and could have just been a longer chapter to keep it consistent. The ending isn't really an ending of a book, more like a chapter. I don't mind harem novels, but if you're going to create one, don't have the MC do favorite one member by doing a technique that can kill if betrayal happens on either end, then have him split himself for the other harem member. It seemed like you wanted to have a single relationship, then changed it to harem mid writing the book.

Worded weirdly, but Manuel is the brother-in-law.

Underwear time?

yes, skill points and skill rewards, no luck point. the points might be the first 10, the skill might be just hitting the level 200.

i gave up about her character. she's 18 but doesn't know about the innuendos or all the sarcastic comments. They have to be careful what they say around her, which I find ridiculous. It's like her age might be 18, but her mind is like a 5 year old. The character acts like she was a 5 year old genius reincarnated into an 18 year old body, and everybody knows it.

I know it's late, but what is her age? says in chapter 2, she is 23-24 and his teacher, but it also says he is also 22 years of age. Did the author mess up ages or forget?