Atomicmass3693

unrelentlessly is a double negative, so it is the same as saying relently as to relent or give up, unrelenting or relentlessly would be correct here. this isn't a complaint about Grammer, just an FYI if you are trying to improve.

it was good

good ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Solid fanfic premise mc isn't stupidly op thats a huge plus, like the harem choices, English well executed. would for this to continue but understand if author has moved on from this idea.