There's nothing much to say really, I'm here for the stories and reading x3
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its genuinely not difficult to keep track of gender. the constant switch completely removes you from the story :(
This is really reaching but there could be a distinction between beauty and woman to the system
nevermind its the whole chapter. editor is confirmed idiot
even the most basic levels of editing would fix this mistake and clearly no effort was put into fixing it. this is why potentially good novels get thrown aside. honestly just disappointed
you used the wrong gender three times in three paragraphs. thats just embarrassing
repeating?
Why? His only ally is unconscious.
Its's wild to see this come to an end, I've been following this story for so long, reading about Shang's Story every day... It's bittersweet, but I'm excited to see what comes next! Thank you for an amazing journey and a truly excellent story.