"A crisis is an opportunity riding the dangerous wind."
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I am exactly the same. I love to get even with people.[img=faceslap]
I don't know if I reviewed this book with this account or with another. But no matter, I wanted to review this novel. Author, ganbate! I really love the content!
A little girl getting reincarnated after dying young. Imagine how great it would be if in real life it could be like this too.
Considering that the author mostly writes in 3rd POV, I would say she's much better with it. However, I really want to see her write another FPOV. This first chapter is like letting us stare at food, but not be able to eat it.
I hope the author plans to write more in this same style. It's so immersive and I feel like I can understand the inner world of MC.
I like how you made this first chapter. I think you should try to write more in this perspective. Though, I'm not pressuring you to. Please write in any style that is comfortable for you.
I have high expectations for this novel. It has great development. Though the pace is a little slow and I see no interesting plot happening, I feel as though I can immerse myself as the MC. It truly makes me think that you are a great writer, Mr/Miss Author.
I like harem prince. Let me marry him and give me ice cream to eat. [img=update]