The Story of Li Hua

I really enjoyed reading your book, the story although a bit unclear are quite interesting and flow nicely. There are a few unnecessary repetitive descriptions but it doesn't really lower the value nor change the intended meaning of the sentences. There are however few missing words or grammatical errors here and there but considering the quality of the overall writing I'm sure you'll be able to overcome this hurdle in time. The interaction between each character are quite satisfying with their conversation but at times I find it hard to understand the intent they are trying to convey with their actions and words. There are a few logic error I found with what she does but then again this is a work of fiction so I won't argue about them or how they should not work or how they are not achievable even if you are a super genius. These are all personal opinions so just keep up the good work author-san, I'm sure you'll go far

Nice writing skills however, I feel so disgusted on her brother, selling his family for gain no matter whatever it is I will never ever forgive him and I sincerely hope author won't be like those chainese dumb writers where's abusive, rapist, disgusting male leads always win. Don't make that trash brother ml because whatever he's doing is not only crime but also unforgivable because no matter whatever good reason or excuse you have to revenge your family or whatever but using ur sister to achieve it... DISGUSTING 🤮🤮🤮🤮